To start. I get the impression that Stein's period is like Emily Dickinson's dash. Both striving after something, as Stein says, "I felt that writing should go on." Both recognize the need to pause and fumble. Stein notes that verbs are more interesting because they allow for mistakes. Dickinson also seems to relish the ability to defend her position against the possibility of mistakes arising in it due to lack of investigation by continuing her sarcastic and caricatured correspondence with Higgins. Both women also seem to feel that this need must be marked out on paper (Stein likes the way they look) in a way that strikes me as a practical sort of field composition. Stein does suggests the practical necessity of these moments of not "going on": Inevitably no matter how completely I had to have writing go on, physically on had to again and again stop sometime and if one had to again and again stop some time then periods had to exist." This portion her definition is also interesting because it seems to use in terms of a cycle (ex. period of revolution) rather than as and end point.
I like the notion that the possibility of mistaking adds richness and interest. But this seems like a difficult effect. One that goes hand in hand with the suggestion that poems are names. That "slowly if you feel what is inside that thing you do not call it by the name by which it is known." That "this that I have just described, the creating it without naming it" allows one to go around the inside mistaking and then "discovering." This is what reading Stein or Coolidge's Polaroids is like for me--the feeling of mistaking only to come to feel that I've been somewhere, that I've learned something. There seems to be something in mistaking, ambiguity, over-definition that requires something of those who approach it. Taxing as this something might be, it takes us round showing each name has been and is being revived. Like sculpting till a finished work is in a museum and they have all come to sand.
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I like your idea of vague verbs equally this effect of having gone somewhere or learned something even if you've left the poem confused.
cool stuff.
is this alex. i think it is but i thought you were a panda.
i was actually thinking of your poems we talked about in class when i was writing the post. and my own work. and the things i like, i'm thinking Mother Death by i don't remember who or Old Angel Midnight by Keroac. you end up going somewhere someplace sometime, and everywhere a few times. so that you have a taste for a sight so far removed but making sense.
then this morning i read about the new sentence. it seemed a bit like common sence.
Sometimes it seems like there are only three poets I talk about, but Joseph Ceravolo does exactly this "going someplace sometime, and everywhere a few times" for me. He has a book in the library if anybody wants to check him out.
Wow, our library has Ceravolo? I second that suggestion.
thanks for the sugestion. i'm so glad for the introduction.
I know. I was surprised too! They have Spring in this World of Poor Mutts.
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